My life, writings and relatively organized thoughts...

So sorry it has been so long since my last entry. I kind of got lost in some other things. Anyway, I left you hanging last time with a rough draft of a poem. Well, I was hoping some of you would try your luck at writing one of your own. I did some rewriting and complete overhaul and added more substance to the previous skeleton of an outline. So, here is what I came up with. Let me know what you think, please! Winter nights by candlelight she read— ...Snuggling into my sleeping bag. Frostbitten and exhausted. Can’t sleep. Awaiting the last hours till Edmund treks with me to Everest’s peak. Standing side by side atop the world. A wonderful feeling, but my teeth were chattering so hard. I wanted off the mountain. I don't like cold! ... —until her mother brushed her hair and tucked her into bed. Springtime afternoons in the windy oak tree swing she read more— ...Celebrating the passage of the 13 amendment. A night out at the theater. She began wondering, "Wha...